Please constructive criticism.Thank You HelferDesign

Welcome! I knew you'll show up here :) diplomod

DIPLOMOD ... A joy to be back in competition, and find good people. HelferDesign

Lovely design. marcscreations

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QUEEN ... Thank You, grateful. HelferDesign

MI ... Thank You. HelferDesign

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MARIJA ... Thank You for your commentary.Is Lovely. HelferDesign

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SEVENNINE ... Thank You, refreshing words. HelferDesign HelferDesign

you're most welcome HelferDesign... keep up the good work... damang

STT2 ... Thank You for your commentary HelferDesign

BRANI ... Thank You. HelferDesign

schmuke

SCHMUKE ... Thank You for your commentary HelferDesign

TEZORA ... Thank You for your commentary HelferDesign HelferDesign

TEZORA ... At the beginning of my presentation request Constructive criticism, no emotional or personal criticism. Constructive criticism explains professionally ,the technical changes of the design: 1. Problems in visual comunication: Sender, message, medium, receiver 2. Problems in Primary Forms: Psychological Asociaction of lines and forms 3. Problems in the design elements: Space, image, text, color 4. Problems in the psychology of the color 5. Problems whit the 3 direction of color 6. Problems in Composition : Rules of composition This avoids the simplistic, emotional and personal criticism of "works or does not work" If I have to design it for you, first has to accept the bill ... and a second response a GRAPHIC TEST to know their tastes and preferences graphs, because everyone is different. Designers call it respect because the work hours can not be reduced to criticism of seconds. This reflection is for the welfare of the community and the success of the event. HelferDesign

I am not trying to offend you, but the design is not working: there is too much going on. You have a good idea by trying to showcase the 'World of Spar' by including images of products they carry and the names, but the combination of your typography and imagery is not melding smoothly. I think the design works better without the squares images, b/c their sharp rectagular angles are too abrupt. I'll try to be more explanatory in my future critiques. Not trying to offend, but giving you some constructive criticism. tezora

TEZORA ... Not working : ( ... The design is inspired by a REBUS, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rebus, A rebus (Latin: "by things") is a kind of word puzzle that uses pictures to represent words or parts of words ... If you use a rule of composition Renaissance or modern. the unit design is a square, because the format of "The Bag" is square. HelferDesign HelferDesign

I think you've got a very personal style and there are sure people who simply don't like it, everybody is different. I found your designs refreshing after having seen many similar things here. gudaltus

ciao HelferDesign!! djanlooka

good luck !!! damang

good luck :) Irina

Nice works ! Maruska

Which is the winner?- 08-28-2009 HelferDesign

Good question Norett

I was just reading in the newspaper KRONENZEITUNG who is the winner: tata and the winner is the design WORTSALAT!!! Congratulations schmuke

And the other winners are? Norett

It is irresponsible not to indicate what has to be on German Language. Automatically every designer, with another language, is disqualified. HelferDesign